In the morning, i ate my breakfast with my friends . The breakfast was delicious . While we were enjoying our breakfast . The buses in its way to our resort . After we ate our breakfast buses were came . So we got on to the buses . The buses would took us to Sentosa island . After arriving in sentosa we went to saw the Images of Singapore but before that we took a few pictures for our memories . So after we watched the Image of Singapore we gathered again . Some of us didn't want to go to Universal studios Singapore . So we got separated .
After that we ate lunch . Although the food court was full of people we managed to look for food that we could eat . When we wanted to play instead of eating . We saw stand which sold nachos . So instead of playing we had some of them we ate nachos . After we ate nachos we decided to play again because the weather was too hot so we went a ride . We play the Mummy, i played mummy more than twice and before that i played Galactica . After i played both of them we went shopping in the place called Far Far Away after done shopping we decided to play mummy again . We played again after we finished the ride my friend want wanted to play again . We put our bags in the lockers but the lockers only booked for one time but other friends changed the lockers . After we had finished playing we went to the lockers room but my friends lockers couldn't be opened she asked the security about the problem . But still the bags couldn't be found . So we went to Lost and Found departemen . I tried to call my teachers and then after a few minutes my friends bags found . After that we must gather .
We had dinner there . After ate our dinner we gathered again and took a train because we wanted to see . The song of the sea so we had queue to take the train . After we saw it we went to parking lot because our buses were parked there . When we found our buses we went back to the resort happily
Amanda, again the problem of I - and not i. Then, still punctuation. While we were enjoying our breakfast, .... ( use comma).
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